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Dear Editors and Reviewers.

Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’ comments concerning our manuscript entitled “A simple method for preparation of ****** used as active, stable and biocompatible SERS substrate by using electrostatic self-aembly” (ID: ******-09-1602).Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding significance to our researches.We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval.Revised portion are marked in red in the paper.The main corrections in the paper and the responds to the reviewer’s comments are as flowing:

Responds to the reviewer’s comments:

Reviewer 1#

Response to comment: The review is complete and the main objection lies with the English language.I point out a few sentences only from the ABSTRACT and Conclusion.The rest corrections have to be done by the authors.I encourage the authors for small sentences.

ABSTRACT - A new SERS-active ****** on the surface of gla slide has been prepared by a low-cost electrochemical strategy at a proper voltage and polyvinyl alcohol (******) concentration

in electrolyte is performed.With scanning electron microscopy, the morphology of the Ag nanofilm is a two-dimensional structure with nano-scale regions should read as A new SERS-active ****** on the surface of gla slide has been prepared by a low-cost

electrochemical strategy using polyvinyl alcohol (******) at a proper voltage. The two dimensional morphology of the ****** has been examined by scanning electron microscopy.

Conclusion -- ...The morphologies and SERS activity and stability of the ******s are characterized by SEM and SERS measurement, respectively.SERS spectra of ****** and ****** obtained from these ******s compare with those from Ag colloids, which reavals an excellent enhancement effect of the ******s as SERS-active substrates.

should read as The morphology, stability and SERS activity of the ****** have been studied.The excellent enhancement of SERS spectra for ****** and ****** from the ****** is observed in comparison to the Ag colloid system...The whole MS needs to be edited before it is accepted for publication.

Response: As the Reviewer"s good instruction, we have tried our best to revise the English of the whole MS carefully.In order to make the whole MS better understanding, we have revised some

long sentences into short sentences and edited the whole MS according to the Reviewer’s instruction.Meanwhile, we also have asked some colleagues who are skilled authors of English language papers to help us for checking the English (see the revised MS).We hope that the language is now acceptable for the next review proce.Special thanks to you for your good comments.

Reviewer 3#

1.Response to comment: English should be checked throughout the text by a native English speaker.

Response: According to the reviewer"s good instruction, we have revised the whole manuscript carefully and tried to avoid any grammar or syntax error.In addition, we have asked several colleagues who are skilled authors of English language papers to check the English.We hope that the language is now acceptable for the next review proce.

2.Response to comment: The manuscript is too long.It must be shortened.The authors must be more concise.The introduction takes three pages.In fact, it is very hard to read the paper.There are several sentences that should be changed for a better understanding.Some corrections are done in the margins of the manuscript (pods file).I enclosed a copy of that.

Response: We agree the reviewer"s good advice.Yes, the manuscript is too long (especially the part of introduction), which is very hard to read the paper.And that, there are several sentences are hard for understanding.Thus, we have revised the original manuscript in order to reduce the length of the manuscript and make it better understanding (especially the part of Introduction).However, due to additional experiments and explanations are added in the revised manuscript according to the other Reviewer′s suggestion, the revised manuscript is still long in some sort.Neverthele, we have revised the sentences (especially some long sentences) for the whole manuscript in order to make the manuscript more concise. Especially, the corrections done in the margins of the manuscript (pods file) which the Reviewer enclosed are very helpful to us.We are very appreciated for the Reviewers good comments and corrections made for our manuscript.

3.Response to comment: Repetitions and several adjectives should be avoided.For example: authors use ".active, stable and biocompatible SERS substrate." a lot of times through the text.Also, they indicate ".perfect stability of." or ".perfect biocompatible." Well, SERS spectra of SC become weaker when the time goes on thus, no Raman signal will be obtained for a long, long time.It means, that the time deteriorates Ag surface.I think that "perfect" is not a good adjective.Response: It is really true as the Reviewer suggested that some repetitions and several adjectives should be avoided.Thus, we have made corrections according to the Reviewer’s good instructions.We have deleted the repeated words such as "active", "stable" and "biocompatible" in some sentences.Meanwhile, like the Reviewer questioned that we have not studied the SERS spectra of SC for a long, long time.Thus, the using of "perfect" to describe the SERS substrate of Ag nanofilm is inapposite.Considering the Reviewer’s good suggestion, we have deleted this adjective in some sentences of the revised manuscript. 4.Response to comment: About organization of the manuscript.There are too many epigrap****** in

section 2.I propose the following points:

2.1.Reagents.Preparation of ****** and ****** (old points 2.1 and 2.2 together)

2.2.Preparation of ******-protected Ag nanoparticles and ******s (old points 2.3 and 2.4 together)

2.3.Experimental equipments (old points 2.5; 2.6 and 2.7 together) Response: Considering the Reviewer’s good suggestion, we have re-organized the epigrap****** in section 2.We have organized three parts for the section 2 of the revised manuscript.The epigrap****** in section 2 are as following: 2.1.Reagents and preparation of ****** and ******

2.2.Preparation of ******-protected ****** (******-Ag CNPs) and ******s 2.3.Experimental equipments

Special thanks to you for your good comments.

Dear Editors and Reviewers.

We have tried our best to revise and improve the manuscript and made great changes in the manuscript according to the Reviwers′good comments.And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper.We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that the corrections will meet with approval.Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.

We look forward to your information about my revised papers and thank you for your good comments.

Yours sincerely, R.M.Liu

5.Response to comment: Point 3.3 is entitled "stability and repeatability of ******s".Some

questions: Here, it is shown the dependence of SERS relative intensities of SC on time.Is it the same sample (******-adsorbate) that is stored and then SERS spectra are recorded at different times? or instead, the same ****** is stored and then the adsorbate is added at different times and thereafter the SERS spectra are recorded?? Authors should clarify the procedure.Are different results expected with these two procedures? Have been these two methods checked? It is poible that only ******s stored without adsorbate are active for a longer time?

Experimentally it is often observed that roughed surface in SERS produces molecular degradation and a comparation between Raman and SERS spectra is neceary to identify the molecular fundamental modes.Why the authors did not record Raman spectra of SC? Raman spectra should be added to Fig.5.The point 3.3 should be 3.2 because a characteristic of surface is explained and must follow point 3.1.The old 3.2 becomes 3.3.Moreover, old epigrap****** 3.2.1.and 3.2.2 should be removed and a unique point 3.3.should be presented instead and entitled " Biocompatibility of ******s.SERS spectra of ****** and ******".Also, epigraph 3.4 must be removed and the text must follow to the new section 3.3.Response: We are very sorry for our unclear report in the section of 3.3.For the first question proposed by the Reviewer, our answer is as following: Yes, in the section of 3.3, the main intention is to display the stability and reproducibility of Ag

nanofilms.Fig.6 (in the original manuscript, Fig.5 in the revised manuscript) shows the dependence of SERS relative intensities of SC on time.In this section, the ******s are stored and then the adsorbate is added at different times and thereafter the SERS spectra are recorded.For the second question proposed by Reviewer, our answer is as following:

As the Reviewer"s good instruction, we have clarified the procedure in the revised manuscript.

However, in this study, we have not studied the first procedure of the same sample (******-adsorbate) that is stored and then SERS spectra are recorded at different times.Thus, these two methods have not been checked.Take the time limit of the submiion of the revised manuscript into account; it is difficult to carry out the first procedure in the revised manuscript.However, we appreciate for the Reviewers’ good advice earnestly.We will check these two procedures in future studies.For the third question proposed by Reviewer, our answer is as following: According to the Reviewer"s good instruction, we have recorded Raman spectra of SC in solid state, as shown in Fig.1(a) (Fig.4(a) in revised manuscript).Meanwhile, the points 3.2 and 3.3 have also been re-written according to the instructions proposed by the Reviewer.(See the section of 3.2 and 3.3 in the revised manuscript)

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Fig1.man spectrum of (a) solid SC.SERS spectra of 1.0×10 mol/L SC aqueous solution

adsorbed on (b) gla slide, (c) ******-Ag CNPs, and (d) ******, respectively.

6.Response to comment: Sentence "the number of spectra for every condition is five" (page 9) or the number of spectra is 5 (Table 1 and 2), what does it mean? Perhaps something like this: Each

SERS spectrum is recorded 5 times in different points of the ****** surface? Response: As the Reviewer"s good question, the sentence of “the number of spectra for every

condition is five" or “the number of spectra is 5 (Table 1 and 2)” in the original manuscript is hard to be understood.This sentence means that each SERS spectrum is recorded 5 times in differpoints of the ****** surface.we have revised this sentence in the revised manuscript according to the Reviewer"s advice.7.Response to comment: Epigrap****** of Table 1 and 2 should be revised.Corrections are indicated in the manuscript.Response: According to the Reviewer"s good instruction, we have revised the epigrap****** of Table

1 and 2.The epigraph of Table 1 “Table 1 Preliminary aignations of the Raman bands (Mean ± S.D., n=5) for the SERS spectra of ******.The number of spectra is 5” is revised as “Aignments for the SERS bands (Mean ± S.D., n=5) of ****** (based on Refs.[25-30]).”

The epigraph of Table 2 “Table 2 Observed wavenumbers (Mean ± S.D., n=5), aignments,

and local coordinates of ******, excited at 785 nm.The number of spectra is 5.[35-37]” is revised as “Table 2 Aignments for the SERS bands (Mean ± S.D., n=5) of ****** (based on Refs.[32-34]).”

8.Response to comment: Figure 4 shows SERS spectra of ****** and ****** recorded on different Ag nanofilms.What do authors want to say? This experiment is to check the reproducibility of the method? Thus, it is better to use the word "reproducibility" and not "repeatability".This must be clarified in the text.

Response: As the Reviewer"s good advice, we should use the word “reproducibility” and not

"repeatability".Figure 4 (in the original manuscript) shows SERS spectra of ****** and ****** recorded on the different ******s prepared under the same conditions.The authors want to display the reproducibility of the ******s prepared by this simple method.Thus, we have replaced the

word "repeatability" by "reproducibility" in the revised manuscript.

9.Response to comment: Uv-vis absorption spectrum of ******-protected Ag nanoparticules shows a maximum at 418 nm and at 785 nm the absorbance is zero (Figure 1b).Given that SERS spectra are recorded at 785 nm, I think that this excitation line is very far from the maximum to obtain a good signal.In fact, the Raman signal is very weak (Figure 3).Is it poible to obtain a better signal employing another excitation laser, for example, 514nm? I mean, probably the 785nm line is better for ****** than for ******-protected Ag nanoparticules, but under other different excitation laser the ******-protected Ag nanoparticules could be a good substrate for ****** or ******.Have been checked different excitation laser lines?

Response: We are very sorry for our negligence of the explanation for why SERS spectra of ******

and ****** are recorded at 785 nm.In the studying of the SERS effect of ****** and ******, we think that the excitation with the 785 nm wavelength has a number of advantageous features compared to [a] other wavelengt******.A previous study has reported that a laser wavelength shorter than 514.5 nm is known to enhance photodiociation and cause protein degradation even at a low power.However, the sample damage can be avoided using laser light of a longer wavelength.No paling effects were observed using laser light with wavelength ≥660 nm.In their study, degradation of the biological objects was observed when using 514.5 nm excitation lasers.Meanwhile, it is known that when using 660 nm irradiation, for a laser power of 10mW and a diameter of 10 μm, 2the light intensity is up to 127 MW/m .In our system, the laser power is set at 65mW and the 2 3 2 diameter is 90μm.So the light intensity was ca.10 MW/m (10 W/cm ), which is much smaller than that of 660 nm irradiation.Thus, in our studies, we employed a 65-mW, 785-nm diode laser to record the Raman and SERS spectra of ****** and ****** in order to avoid the photodiociation and degradation of the proteins.

[a] G.J.Puppels, J.H.F.Olminkhof, G.M.J.Segers-Nolten, C.Otto, F.F.M.Demul, J.Greve.Laser Irradiation and Raman Spectroscopy of Single Living Cells and Chromosomes: Sample Degradation Occurs with 514.5 nm but not with 660 nm Laser Light .Exp.Cell Res, 195 (1991) 361.

Special thanks to you for your good comments.

Reviewer 4#

1.Response to comment: I"m not familiar with blood sample preparation but I wasn"t able to extract the final concentration of ****** and ****** added to the ******-NPs and ******.This value has to be clearly reported in the text.

Response: As the Reviewer suggested that we have calculated the final concentration of ****** and ****** added to the ******-protected ****** (******-Ag CNPs) and ****** in the revised manuscript.According our calculation, the final concentration of ****** and ****** added to ****** is ca.4.8 and 1.5%, respectively.However, take the dilution of the Ag colloid into account, the final concentration of ****** and ****** added to the ******-Ag CNPs is ca.0.27 and 0.08 %, respectively.All these concentrations have been added in the revised manuscript.Although the final concentrations of ****** added to the ******-NPs and ****** are different, the quantity of ****** lighted by the laser spot based on ****** (ca.6.075×10 g) equals to (in order of magnitude) that based on ******-Ag CNP samples (ca. 5.087×10

g). Similarly, the quantity of ****** lighted by the laser spot based on ****** (ca.1.944×10 g) equals to (in order of magnitude) that based on ******-Ag CNPs (ca.1.717×10 g).Take the SERS detection of ****** for example: For the SERS detection of ****** based on ******-Ag CNPs, the probe volume is considered a focal [b]“tube”

with a waist diameter of 90 ?m and a depth of ca.1cm.By using the concentration of ****** (0.08%) one can determine the quantity of ****** molecules contributing to the Raman intensity ( (1000+60) ×10 ×0.08% × ? (45 ×10 ) ×1×10 / [(1000+60)×10 ] ~ 5.087×10 g).For the SERS detection of ****** based on ******, supposing that all the ****** molecules adsorbed on the surface of ****** evenly, one can determine the quantity of ****** molecules contributing to the Raman intensity (~ (50) ×10 ×1.5% × ? (45 ×10 )

/ ? (5 ×10 ) ~ 6.075×10 g).

[b] L.Baia, K.Gigant, U.Poet, et al.Appl.Spectrosc, 56 (2002) 536.

(2) Response to comment:

In the experimental results section does not appear how the SERS

measurements on ******-NPs were performed.

Response: We are very sorry for our negligence of introduce how the SERS measurements on ******-Ag CNPs were performed in the experimental results section.As Reviewer suggested that we have made complementarities of this experimental proce in the section of 2.3 of the revised manuscript.(the section of 2.3, 16-20 lines)

(3) Response to comment: A significant comparison between the SERS activities of ******-NPs

and ****** substrates is not poible based on what reported in the paper.For instance, is the

number of NPs lighted by the laser spot equals for ******-NP and ****** samples? The authors have to make clear to the reader what they are comparing.Moreover, the normal Raman of ****** and ****** in solution and/or in solid state in fig.3 would be helpful to understand the effect of the metal-analyte interaction.

Response: We are very sorry for our unclear description of what the SERS activities of ******-NPs

and ****** substrates are comparing.In Fig 3 of the original manuscript (Fig 8 in revised

manuscript ), we mainly want to tell the reader the ******-Ag CNPs are unfit for the SERS detection

of ****** and ******, compared to the ******s prepared by electrostatic self-aembly with the

******-Ag CNPs.That is, the SERS effect of ******-Ag CNPs for ****** and ****** is much weaker than that of ******.According to the Reviewer good question (“is the number of NPs lighted by the laser spot equals for ******-NP and ****** samples?”), we have calculated the number of NPs lighted by the laser spot for ******-Ag CNPs and ******s.The calculation results show that the number of NPs lighted by the laser spot is not equal for ******-Ag CNPs and ******s.One can calculate the concentration of the ******-Ag CNPs in Ag colloid is ca.1.26×10 /m according to the electrochemical reaction in our work.For the SERS detection based on ******-Ag CNPs, the probe volume was considered a focal “tube” with a waist diameter of 90 ?m and a depth of ca.1cm.By using the concentration of ******-Ag CNPs in Ag colloid (1.26×10 /m ) one can determine the number of NPs lighted by the laser spot (1.26×10 × ? (45×10 ) ×1×10 ~ 68.011×10 ).For the SERS detection based on ******, by supposing that the distribution of the NPs on the surface of ****** is uniform, one can determine the number of NPs lighted by the laser spot ( ? (45 ×10 ) /? (200 ×10 /2)

~2.025×10 ).It can be seen that, the number of NPs lighted by the laser spot for ******-Ag CNPs is more than that for ******s.However, the experimental results show that the SERS effect of ****** and ****** on ******-Ag CNPs is much weaker than that on ******s, indicating that the SERS activity of ******s is better than that of ******-Ag CNPs.As the Reviewer suggested that, we have recorded the normal Raman scattering of ****** and ****** in solid state, as shown in Fig 2A(c) and Fig 2B(c), respectively.Very weak Raman signals are observed from solid ****** and ******.We know that Raman spectroscopy is a powerful tool that gives precise information on the vibration energies of molecules, and can provide the fingerprint for unique chemical identification.However, the Raman scattering cro section of most biological macromolecules is extremely small, which causes the Raman signals of biological [c]macromolecules are very difficult to obtain .Thus, in this paper, we attempt to obtain new SERS substrates to solve this question. Such as the Ag nanofilms prepared by using electrostatic self-aembly with the ******-Ag CNPs in this work.

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Fig.2.(a) Raman spectrum of (A) solid ****** and (B) solid ******.SERS spectra of (A) ****** and (B)

****** solution adorbed on (b) ******-Ag CNPs and (c) ******, respectively.

[c] R.Kumar,H.Zhou,S.B.Cronin, Appl.Phys.Lett.91 (2005) 223105.

(4) Response to comment:

It is quite expected that larger EM enhancement occurs on aggregated NPs adsorbed on the gla slide with respect to the un-aggregated ******-NPs.As far as I understood, the key point of the paper is the fabrication of ****** with interparticle regions of ca.300 nm where the ****** and ****** molecules can be located, leading then to intense SERS signals.Therefore, this new substrate should be compared to other silver nanofilms which do not present these cavities, in order, also, to give some evidences to the previous hypothesis, which is a mere speculation based on the results reported in the article.

Response: As the Reviewer suggested that we have checked the new substrate with another silver

nanofilm which dose not present these cavities.Fig.3a (following) shows the SEM image of a

common ****** prepared using coupling agent of cysteamine and common Ag NPs on the

surface of the gla slide.It shows that the average size of the particles on the surface of this common ****** is ca.75 ± 5 nm, which is much smaller than that (200 ± 50 nm) of the

particles on the surface of the new ****** prepared using electrostatic self-aembly with

******-Ag CNPs (Fig.3b).Meanwhile, single layer of Ag nanoparticles is observed and no lots of

nano-scale regions are formed on the surface of the common ******.Fig.4 (following) shows the SERS spectra of ****** solution (1.5 %, 50 ?L) on this common Ag nanofilm (Fig.4 a) and the new ****** (Fig.4b) with a diameter of 1 cm, respectively.It shows that the EM enhancement occurs on the common ****** is weaker than that on the new ******.Meanwhile, striking spectral differences are seen in SERS spectra at 812, and 1022 cm , indicating that the orientation of the adsorbed ****** molecules is different on these two ******s.We think that it is mainly related to the surface characteristics of this new Ag nanofilm.On the surface of the new ******, the average size of the aggregated particles is up to ca.200 ± 50 nm, which is much larger than that of the common ******.It improves the adsorption ability of the ****** molecules onto the surface of the new ****** effectively.Meanwhile, lots of nano-scale regions with the size of ca.300 ± 50 nm are formed between the adjacent nanoparticles on the surface of the new ******, which makes ****** molecules can be embedded in effectively.It implies that the presence of nano-scale regions on the surface of the new ****** is an important factor for SERS effect of biological macromolecules. 图略

Fig.3.SEM image of the ****** prepared by using coupling agent of cysteamine (a) and by

using electrostatic self-aembly with ******-Ag CNPs (b) on gla slide.

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Fig.4.SERS spectra of ****** solution (1.5 %) on (a) the common ****** prepared by using

coupling agent of cysteamine and common Ag nanoparticles and (b) on the ****** prepared by

using electrostatic self-aembly with ******-Ag CNPs, respectively.

(5) Response to comment: The SERS spectra showed in fig.5c is doubtfully aigned to ******.I suggest to the authors to carry out control experiments so that to rule out the presence of impurities on their silver film.In the following paper is reported the SERS spectrum of Citrate anion on silver NPs: Title: Anomalous Raman bands appearing in surface-enhanced Raman spectra Author(s): Sanchez-Cortes, S; Garcia-Ramos, JV Source: JOURNAL OF RAMAN SPECTROSCOPY Volume: 29

Iue: 5

Pages: 365-371 Published: MAY 1998

Response: We are very grateful for your providing of the reference above.We have read this reference carefully.As Sanchez-Cortes et al.reported that the ions and new molecular species

resulting from the reduction of the metal will remain in the colloid system (especially in the citrate colloids), which has an obvious impact on the SERS of the analyte.Thus, in our present work, we employed the method of electrolysis to obtain ******-Ag CNPs, and employed the method of electrostatic self-aembly to obtain ******s.In our experiment of preparation of ******-Ag CNPs, ****** was not employed act as reducing agent in order to avoid the effect of citrate anion on the SERS of the analyte recorded on the surface of the new ******s.Considering the Reviewer’s good instruction, we have carried out a control experiment.In this control experiment, we have checked the Raman scattering on the surface of the new ********s prepared under the same conditions, as shown in following Fig .5.The experimental results show that the effect of the impurities on the surfaces of these ******s on the SERS of the analyte is negligible.Meanwhile, as reported by Sanchez-Cortes et al., the Raman spectrum of solid citrate is shown [d]in Fig.6 a.

We can see that the main SERS bands of solid citrate recorded by us (Fig.7) are close to the Raman bands of solid citrate reported by Sanchez-Cortes et al.

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Fig.3.Raman spectra of the surfaces of the different ******s (a, b, c, d) prepared using

electrostatic self-aembly with ******-Ag CNPs.

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Fig.6.Effect of excitation wavelength on the SERS background of an aggregated citrate colloid:

(A) FT-Raman spectrum of solid citrate (λex=l 064 nm); (B) FT-Raman spectrum of aqueous citrate (2 M, λex=l 064 nm); (C) FT-SER spectrum of the aggregated colloid after addition of NO3 (0.05 M) (λex=1064nm); (D) SERS spectrum of the same sample with excitation at 514.5 nm.

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Fig.7.SERS spectra of ****** based on ****** prepared by using electrostatic self-aembly with ******-Ag CNPs.

[d] S.S.Corte and J.V.G.Ramos.Anomalous Raman Bands Appearing in Surface-Enhanced

Raman Spectra.JOURNAL OF RAMAN SPECTROSCOPY.29 (1998) 365.

Special thanks to you for your good comments and suggestions！

Dear Editors and Reviewers.

We have tried our best to revise and improve the manuscript and made great changes in the

manuscript according to the Reviwers′good comments.And here we did not list the changes but

marked in red in revised paper.

We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that the corrections will meet with approval.

Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.

We look forward to your information about my revised papers and thank you for your good

comments.

Yours sincerely, R.M.Liu

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（2）文章编号即文章的id，要与邮件中显示的编号一致，也可以去投稿系统中查找。因为编辑每天要处理许多稿件，回复信中这样写可以让编辑和审稿人清楚的知道我们是哪篇文章，正所谓与人方便，与己方便。

（3）回复信开头一般要先说明稿件中如何进行的修改，例如在文中以加粗，红色字或者ms模式修订等标亮；
然后感谢审稿人及编辑的审阅及评价；
另外，还需要在该部分体现出文章题目（最好加粗或者斜体等方式标亮）；
最后是客套话，如我们还想继续提交到您的****杂志，希望您再帮忙审阅等等。

要注意语言一定表达中肯、谦逊，语言流畅。

2.接下来，就可以对审稿人的意见一一回复，主要包括各审稿人的各个问题，还有我们的一一感谢，及修改方式。这里，需要注意的是：

（2）每一条意见回复前最好先对审稿人表示感谢，礼多人不怪，为了顺利发表，多写几个字又何妨呢；

（3）能准确完整的补充审稿人提出的要求；
不能补充的资料能够引用文献充分的论证，有理有据；

（4）详细的列出修改的内容；

（5）语气委婉，谦逊；

（6）能够随机应变，回复审稿人的意见最好恰到好处。

3.第三部分就是信件的结束语。

这里无非还是再次感谢，最后就是your sincerely及通讯作者的署名了。

回复审稿人信件犹如点睛之笔，如果回复不合适就可能是弄巧成拙，所以，有疑问的亲们，赶紧提问吧，我们会一一接招解答。篇2：写作sci论文投稿回复信 写作sci论文投稿回复信 1.感谢到底原则 2.毛举缕析原则

具体说来就是要达到：审稿人不需要看修改稿，只需看回复信即可清楚了解作者几乎所有的修改，包括修改后的图、表、加入的参考文献，每个修改的前后句子及其所属的页、段及行数。如果关于写作sci论文修改太多，我们无法在回复信中一一展示时，也要举几个改动大的例子。

3.一条不少原则

所有问题必须逐条认认真真回答。point-by-point，one by one。即使两个审稿人的意见是重复的也要分别回答，详细具体。各审稿人的问题和我们的回复要显著区分开。凡是缺点我们都要逐个改正，凡是夸奖，我们都要一一感谢。

另外，附上几个写作sci论文常用的感谢词，供大家参考：
thanksfor your kind suggestion weare very sorry for our poor english. thankyou for your technical review. withall due respect to the reviewer, we felt that this point is not correct. sci投稿全过程信件模板与相关内容 1 2.1

一、最初投稿cover letter ...................................................................................................................2 2.2

二、催稿信 ...........................................................................................................................................3 2.3

三、修改稿cover letter .......................................................................................................................3 2.4

四、修改稿回答审稿人的意见（最重要的部分） ............................................................................3 2.5

五、文章接受后可以考虑感谢一下负责你文章的编辑或主编（根据需要） ................................5 2.6

六、询问校稿信件（如果文章接受后时间较长） ............................................................................5 2.7

七、文章校稿信件 ...............................................................................................................................5 sci投稿信件的一些套话和模板zz ................................................................................................................6 3.1

一、投稿信 ...........................................................................................................................................6 3.2

二、询问有无收到稿件 .......................................................................................................................6 3.3

三、询问论文审查回音 .......................................................................................................................7 3.4

四、关于论文的总体审查意见 ...........................................................................................................7 3.5

五、给编辑的回信(很多方面的套话) .................................................................................................7 sci论文投稿常见句型和优美句子1000句 ..................................................................................................9 英文论文投稿前应该进行的28个细节检查..................................................................................................9 6.1

（一）投稿程序 .................................................................................................................................12 6.2

（二）投稿经验总结 .........................................................................................................................13 sci论文写作实战技巧 ..................................................................................................................................14 sci期刊稿件的准备与投送 ..........................................................................................................................15 8.1 稿件的准备 .........................................................................................................................................16 8.2 首页或投稿函(cover letter) .................................................................................................................16 8.2.1 著作权声明(authorship responsibility and con-tributions) .....................................................16 8.2.2 版权转让许可(license for publication) ...................................................................................17 8.2.3 文章类型/栏目(article type) ....................................................................................................17 8.2.4 基金和资金资助(funding disclosure) .....................................................................................17 8.2.5 利益冲突(conflict of interest)..................................................................................................18 8.3 电子文档的准备 .................................................................................................................................20 一年三篇if大于7的牛人告诉你怎么写sci .............................................................................................20 9.1

一、研究生必备四本 .........................................................................................................................20 9.2

二、论文写作要点 .............................................................................................................................21 9.3

三、如何撰写实验研究论文（唐朝枢）..........................................................................................21 9.4

四、如何写好论文讨论部分：科学论文的讨论需要结构化 ..........................................................22 9.5

五、关于写英文文章的秘诀 .............................................................................................................22 9.6

六、写论文的技巧 .............................................................................................................................23 9.6.1 优秀论文的要素 .....................................................................................................................23 9.6.2 优秀论文的误区 .....................................................................................................................23 9.6.3 写文章的条件 .........................................................................................................................23 9.6.4 写论文的要点 .........................................................................................................................23 9.6.5 reviewer check list ................................................................................................................24 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 9.6.6 ieee transactions on csvt review form ..............................................................................24 9.7

七、论文写作技巧 .............................................................................................................................24 9.8

八、优秀论文结构范例 .....................................................................................................................25 9.9 处理被拒 .............................................................................................................................................26 9.10 常见问题 .........................................................................................................................................26 （含多个连接，“sci论文投稿常见句型和优美句子1000句”） 2 sci 投稿全过程信件模板一览 2.1

一、最初投稿cover letter dear editors: we would like to submit the enclosed manuscript entitled “paper title”, which we wish to be considered for publication in “journal name”.no conflict of interest exits in the submiion of this manuscript, and manuscript is approved by all authors for publication.i would like to declare on behalf of my co-authors that the work described was original research that has not been published previously, and not under consideration for publication elsewhere, in whole or in part.all the authors listed have approved the manuscript that is enclosed. in this work, we evaluated ?? (简要介绍一下论文的创新性).i hope this paper is suitable for “journal name”. the following is a list of poible reviewers for your consideration: 1) name a e-mail: ××××@×××× 2) name b e-mail: ××××@×××× thank you and best regards. yours sincerely, ××××××

corresponding author: name: ××× e-mail: ××××@×××× 2.2

二、催稿信 dear prof.×××: sorry for disturbing you.i am not sure if it is the right time to contact you to inquire about the status of my submitted manuscript titled “paper title”.(id: 文章稿号), although the status of “with editor” has been lasting for more than two months, since submitted to journal three months ago.i am just wondering that my manuscript has been sent to reviewers or not? thank you very much for your consideration. best regards! yours sincerely, ××××××

corresponding author: name: ×××

e-mail: ××××@×××× 2.3

三、修改稿cover letter dear dr/ prof..（写上负责你文章编辑的姓名，显得尊重，因为第一次的投稿不知道具体负责的编辑，只能用通用的editors）: thank you and best regards. yours sincerely, ××××××

corresponding author: name: ×××

e-mail: ××××@×××× 2.4

四、修改稿回答审稿人的意见（最重要的部分） list of responses dear editors and reviewers: reviewer #1: response: ×××××× response: ××××××

。。。。。。

逐条意见回答，切忌一定不能有遗漏

针对不同的问题有下列几个礼貌术语可适当用用：
we are very sorry for our negligence of „„... we are very sorry for our incorrect writing „„... it is really true as reviewer suggested that„„ we have re-written this part according to the reviewer’s suggestion as reviewer suggested that„„ considering the reviewer’s suggestion, we have „„

最后特意感谢一下这个审稿人的意见：
reviewer #2: 同上述

reviewer #3: ×××××× other changes: 1.line 60-61, the statements of “„„” were corrected as “„„„„” 2.line 107, “„„” was added 3.line 129, “„„” was deleted ×××××× we tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the manuscript.these changes will not influence the content and framework of the paper.and here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper. we appreciate for editors/reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that the correction will meet with approval. 2.5

五、文章接受后可以考虑感谢一下负责你文章的编辑或主编（根

据需要）

dear prof.××××××: thanks very much for your kind work and consideration on publication of our paper.on behalf of my co-authors, we would like to expre our great appreciation to editor and reviewers. thank you and best regards. yours sincerely, ××××××

corresponding author: name: ×××

e-mail: ××××@×××× 2.6

六、询问校稿信件（如果文章接受后时间较长） dear ×××: sorry for disturbing you.i am not sure if it is the right time to contact you to inquire about the status of our accepted manuscript titled “paper title” (id: 文章稿号), since the copyright agreement for publication has been sent to you two months ago.i am just wondering that how long i can receive the proof of our manuscript from you? i would be greatly appreciated if you could spend some of your time for a reply.i am very pleased to hear from you. thank you very much for your consideration. yours sincerely, ××××××

corresponding author: name: ×××

e-mail: ××××@×××× 2.7

七、文章校稿信件 dear mr.×××: thanks very much for your kind letter about the proof of our paper titled “paper title” (id: 文章稿号) for publication in “journal name”.we have finished the proof reading and checking carefully, and some corrections about the proof and the answers to the queries are provided below.corrections: 1.in ****** should be **** (page ***, right column, line***) 2.in **** the “*****” should be “****” (page ****, right column, line****) answers for “author queries”: 1.*********************. 2.********************** 3.**********************篇4：sci投稿信件的一些套话 sci投稿信件的一些套话 please acknowledge receipt of this e-mail response to reviewers reviewer 1 question 1 ...xx......... answer:.........(pagexx, linexx ) 文字修改

*******（原来的意见）

corrected ******（(pagexx, linexx )）

就是让他一眼就看出来你改了，在那里？如何改的

投稿: contribution, paper contribution from p.r.china notification of acceptance / rejection acceptance letter 投稿信

1.dear dr.defendi ml: i am sending a manuscript entitled ―‖ by – which i should like to submit for poible publication in the journal of.we have chosen this journal because it deals with. 6.please ask someone familiar with english language to help you rewrite this paper.as you will see, i have made some correction at the beginning of the paper where some syntax is not satisfactory. 8.the wording and style of some section, particularly those concerning hplc, need careful editing.attention should be paid to the wording of those parts of the discuion of and summary which have been underlined. 9.preliminary experiments only have been done and with exception of that summarized in table 2, none has been repeated.this is clearly unsatisfactory, particularly when there is so much variation between aays. 10.the condition of incubation are poorly defined.what is the temperature? were antibody used?

五、给编辑的回信 1.in reply to the referee’s main criticism of paper, it is poible to say that –

include a toxicity table in my article although perhaps i should have done.this was for the sake of brevity rather than an error or omiion. 4. dear ms.parisa morovati, thanks for your kind help in this matter. i enclosed a sole submiion form and a potential reviewers. sincerely yours, xue-fei zhou i enclosed a revised manuscript which includes a report of additional experiments done at the referee’s suggestion.you will see that our original findings are confirmed. 8.thank you for your letter.i am very pleased to learn that our manuscript is acceptable for publication in cancer research with minor revision. 10.we deleted the relevant paage since they are not eential to the contents of the paper. sci论文回复信的三大金牌原则 文章初稿投递到杂志社后，根据杂志社的审稿意见，我们要对文章进行修改，并回复编辑和审稿人。这个时候千万不要以为文章的接收概率很大，草草了事即可。相反，由于作者修改不认真，态度不端正，或者没有掌握合适的回复技巧，往往功亏一篑。所以在这里教给大家几个大招，来搞定审稿人和编辑。

1.感谢到底原则 2.毛举缕析原则

具体说来就是要达到：审稿人不需要看修改稿，只需看回复信即可清楚了解作者几乎所有的修改，包括修改后的图、表、加入的参考文献，每个修改的前后句子及其所属的页、段及行数。如果关于文字修改太多，我们无法在回复信中一一展示时，也要举几个改动大的例子。

3.一条不少原则

所有问题必须逐条认认真真回答。point-by-point，one by one。即使两个审稿人的意见是重复的也要分别回答，详细具体。各审稿人的问题和我们的回复要显著区分开。凡是缺点我们都要逐个改正，凡是夸奖，我们都要一一感谢。

SCI文章奖励通告

王晓菲博士在博士研究生阶段以第一作者在国外学术期刊发表2篇SCI论文（检索号已公布）。根据本所研究生工作条例第15条规定，给予论文作者王晓菲等与国内高水平期刊（机械工程学报）版面费相当的奖励（共6000元人民币，其中3000元/篇）。

王晓菲等发表SCI期刊文章信息如下：

1., Shuxin Wang, Jianmin Li, Guokai Zhang, Zhiliang Wu.Conceptual design of a novel multi-DoF manual instrument for laparoscopic surgery.The International Journal of Medical Robotics and Computer Aisted Surgery, 9(1), 75-82.(SCI: 103FI)

2., Shuxin Wang, Jianmin Li, Guokai Zhang, Chao He.Easy grasp: a novel hybrid-driven manual medical instrument for laparoscopic surgery.Proceedings of the Institution of Mechanical Engineers, Part C: Journal of Mechanical Engineering Science, 226(12), 2990-3001.特此通告。

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